KarenT Report post Posted March 6, 2009 Hi Are there any primary (Y5) teachers here who wouldn't mind having a look at J's story for me? He's just come out of school (Oct) to be home educated so I don't have feedback on his creative writing work. He's always struggled in this area, has loads of ideas but can't get them down on paper. I've got him using a software package so he can type it in whatever order takes his fancy rather than Beginning Middle End as in school. I can see for myself that his use of description isn't great (very few adverbs/adjectives etc) but I could do with a professional eye to advise me which areas I should be giving support. Ta muchly Karen x Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
