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Hello everyone.

Ive just realised i have been promoted to ben nevis as apposed to snowden Yeahhhhhhh :rolleyes:

 

Anyway. I just thought i would share this with you. Its a poem i wrote about 3 years ago (i often to write poetry as a way of unloading my very full brain) this one has nothing to do with anything in particular, its just something i thought of at the time. No need to reply to this (if you dont want to) just thought i would share it. >:D<<'>

 

 

 

 

Misty mountains cover me

 

Make me yours

 

Hold me when no one else will

 

When agony fills my heart

 

Can i count on you?

 

A light so bright

 

It blinds me

 

A love so pure

 

I cry

 

Tonight will you guide me?

 

As i touch the sky

 

Upon your landscaped beauty

 

You make me feel at ease

 

So close without touching

 

I feel the autumn's breeze

 

And as my life ends here

 

I dream of summer rain

 

I walk towards the arched light

 

No longer feeling pain

 

Misty mountains take me

 

Cover me

 

Hold me

 

Make me yours

 

Misty mountains

 

I thank you for your guidence

 

I thank you for knowing

 

My name

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Hi Shaz >:D<<'>

 

just read your wonderful poem it is really beautiful and flowing very well. Thanks for sharing with us. :rolleyes::wub:

 

I have been so busy hope you and Kieran are well now.

 

Take care. :)

 

Malika.

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Hi Shaz

 

That was beautiful,......... took me on a journey there.

 

Wow, you have some talent there. >:D<<'> >:D<<'> >:D<<'>

 

Please share some more, they make you feel good

 

Thank you

 

Hailey :notworthy::notworthy::wub:

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A very emotive poem and spiritual. You say it was about nothing in particular but I think you had some very powerful emotions going on inside at the time.

Beautiful and calming, thanks for sharing. :clap:

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