pingu Report post Posted April 2, 2006 Hello everyone. Ive just realised i have been promoted to ben nevis as apposed to snowden Yeahhhhhhh Anyway. I just thought i would share this with you. Its a poem i wrote about 3 years ago (i often to write poetry as a way of unloading my very full brain) this one has nothing to do with anything in particular, its just something i thought of at the time. No need to reply to this (if you dont want to) just thought i would share it. <'> Misty mountains cover me Make me yours Hold me when no one else will When agony fills my heart Can i count on you? A light so bright It blinds me A love so pure I cry Tonight will you guide me? As i touch the sky Upon your landscaped beauty You make me feel at ease So close without touching I feel the autumn's breeze And as my life ends here I dream of summer rain I walk towards the arched light No longer feeling pain Misty mountains take me Cover me Hold me Make me yours Misty mountains I thank you for your guidence I thank you for knowing My name Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Malika Report post Posted April 3, 2006 Hi Shaz <'> just read your wonderful poem it is really beautiful and flowing very well. Thanks for sharing with us. I have been so busy hope you and Kieran are well now. Take care. Malika. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest hallyscomet Report post Posted April 3, 2006 Hi Shaz That was beautiful,......... took me on a journey there. Wow, you have some talent there. <'> <'> <'> Please share some more, they make you feel good Thank you Hailey Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pingu Report post Posted April 3, 2006 Thankyou Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest hallyscomet Report post Posted April 3, 2006 Thank you <'> <'> <'> it really captures you. <'> <'> Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
UltraMum Report post Posted April 3, 2006 That is soooooooooooo beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viper Report post Posted April 3, 2006 A very emotive poem and spiritual. You say it was about nothing in particular but I think you had some very powerful emotions going on inside at the time. Beautiful and calming, thanks for sharing. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DaisyProudfoot Report post Posted April 3, 2006 That's rather lovely. You'd make a good songwriter with lyrics like that ..... could just imagine Dionne Warwick singing it. Excellent Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
justamom Report post Posted April 3, 2006 Thats really lovely Pingu Take care Justamom Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites